Pride at success full of deceit Makes me sick to my tummy. Don't be fooled at my fake jade coloured emotion Inside I'm full of disgust. The crowing of victory Is as underhanded as stealing from a baby.
its amazing the kind of talented people you come across while web surfing...i LOVE free verse poems such as this..you make malaysian english literature industry proud
this was so... unconventional.
ReplyDeleteME LOVED IT. WANT MOAR LIKE THIS.
Aww shucks. Thanks :D
ReplyDeleteI was .. well, I was feeling exactly like that when I wrote it.
its amazing the kind of talented people you come across while web surfing...i LOVE free verse poems such as this..you make malaysian english literature industry proud
ReplyDeleteWow. You just made me blushed a wee bit.
ReplyDeleteI was randomly stalking your blog and I found this.
ReplyDelete^(just justifying my creepily commenting on something posted years ago)
But this is really good. Love it.