Only men who think I'm gorgeous, true?
See, I told you my changes would make it better. :D
I LOVED this! Usually, I'm not that impressed with poetry because all people do these days are throw in fancy words and call it a day, resulting in a nonsensical poem. But there's a fine line between just being cryptic and not making sense.
Coolio. I like it.
This is pretty sophisticated.I love how you describe this boy, with 'ripples' and 'spilling'. The way you describe him is so.. fluid, so smooth.
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