Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Poem: Fake Envy.




Pride at success full of deceit
Makes me sick to my tummy.
Don't be fooled at my fake jade coloured emotion
Inside I'm full of disgust.
The crowing of victory
Is as underhanded as stealing from a baby.

5 comments:

Furree Katt said...

this was so... unconventional.
ME LOVED IT. WANT MOAR LIKE THIS.

Hanis. said...

Aww shucks. Thanks :D
I was .. well, I was feeling exactly like that when I wrote it.

ZACK said...

its amazing the kind of talented people you come across while web surfing...i LOVE free verse poems such as this..you make malaysian english literature industry proud

Hanis. said...

Wow. You just made me blushed a wee bit.

Maryam A. said...

I was randomly stalking your blog and I found this.

^(just justifying my creepily commenting on something posted years ago)

But this is really good. Love it.

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