Pride at success full of deceit Makes me sick to my tummy. Don't be fooled at my fake jade coloured emotion Inside I'm full of disgust. The crowing of victory Is as underhanded as stealing from a baby.
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this was so... unconventional.
ME LOVED IT. WANT MOAR LIKE THIS.
Aww shucks. Thanks :D
I was .. well, I was feeling exactly like that when I wrote it.
its amazing the kind of talented people you come across while web surfing...i LOVE free verse poems such as this..you make malaysian english literature industry proud
Wow. You just made me blushed a wee bit.
I was randomly stalking your blog and I found this.
^(just justifying my creepily commenting on something posted years ago)
But this is really good. Love it.
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